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Post by kjeld111 » Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:52 pm

A liitle nit pick but for all of the greek rivers, you should either use for exemple "Axios River" or "Axios Potamos", but not "Axios Potamos River" as on the map. Potamos already means River.

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Tue Nov 08, 2011 10:05 am

In the Minsk briefing, in the fourth paragraph: where it says, "...to secure city of Minsk..." should be "to secure the city of Minsk."

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Post by El_Condoro » Tue Nov 08, 2011 12:52 pm

Zhitomir briefing: "you're your" - not even sure what this is intended to say.

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Post by Kerensky » Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:11 pm

Reminding myself about this:

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Post by monkspider » Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:16 pm

On Vyazma, it should be "hard-earned", very minor nitpick.

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:32 pm

On the Smolensk briefing, in the third paragraph, "counter-attack" should be one word.

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:41 am

Everything ABOVE this post should be addressed in the upcoming update. Thanks again for all your reports!

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:15 am

Longasc wrote:Minsk 41:

Unit "Karl-Gerat" -> "Karl-Gerät".
There is an "ä" in Gerät (German for device/machine)
The same applies for the Karl-Gerät in "Barbarossa" in the original campaign.
This is part of the equipment editor, not the map. I'll pass this information along.

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:16 am

dshaw62197 wrote:Metaxas Line post-mission briefing: Where it says, "...the Metaxas line..." should read Metaxas Line.
I dont think this is right.

<p>Congratulations, Herr General! With the Metaxas line impotently left behind you, all of Greece has been laid bare! Although I am sure you are eager to personally occupy Athens and chase the British all the way to their evacuation ships, we have a much more important task for you to prepare for.</p>

Remove 'the' from that? No way. :!:

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:18 am

In the Zhitomir briefing:
1. In the third paragraph, where it says "...a weakened, but sizeable force, ..." should read "... a weakened, but sizeable, force ..."
2. In the fourth paragraph, in the last line, "pincer" should be "pincers."

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:20 am

Remove 'the' from that? No way.
Oops! Sorry Kerensky, my bad, I should have written that differently. The "the" is fine; I meant that the word "line" should be capitalized (proper name). Sorry I wasn't too clear on that. :oops:

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:21 am

Alright cool. :)

Everything above THIS POST has been implemented now.

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:25 am

dshaw62197 wrote:In the Zhitomir briefing:
1. In the third paragraph, where it says "...a weakened, but sizeable force, ..." should read "... a weakened, but sizeable, force ..."
2. In the fourth paragraph, in the last line, "pincer" should be "pincers."
That's ZhurivkaA.pzbrf not Zhitomir. :P

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Post by Kerensky » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:28 am

That was my personal 'key' for knowing which of my three scenarios were the 'Kiev ones' They are Z Z and Z.
Zhitomir, Zhurivka, and Zolotonosha.
When you sort alphabetically, these three maps also happen to line up in their correct playing order as well. :)

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Kiev briefing

Post by produit » Fri Nov 11, 2011 11:01 pm

There is an inversion of words:

This should your keep force well away ...

-> This should keep your force well away...

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Sun Nov 13, 2011 7:54 am

In the Spires of Moscow briefing, second paragraph, "well fortified" should be "well-fortified."

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Tue Nov 15, 2011 10:03 am

A few briefings in one post.

In the Streets of Moscow post-mission briefing: where it says, "...from the Soviet Far East, surely we cannot..." drop the comma and place a period, starting "Surely we cannot" as a new sentence.

In the Demyansk Pocket briefing:
1. First paragraph: "counter-offensive" should be one word.
2. Second paragraph: "re-located" should be one word.
3. Fifth paragraph: "ground based" should be "ground-based."

In the Demyansk post-mission briefing:
1. First paragraph: "well positioned" should be "well-positioned."
2. Second paragraph: "well deserved" should be "well-deserved."

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Thu Nov 17, 2011 10:48 pm

A pair of briefing text issues:

1. In the Ostrov post-mission briefing: where it says, "... linking up with units of Army Group South in no time..." had me a bit confused. Shouldn't this be Army Group North?

2. In the Novgorod briefing, in the fourth paragraph, "well equipped" should be "well-equipped."

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Post by OmegaMan1 » Fri Nov 18, 2011 10:08 am

From the Leningrad briefing: in the second paragraph, "counter-attack" should be one word.

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Post by Blitz1945 » Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:08 am

In the Novgorod briefing, it mentions linking up with units from army group south..
I think you mean north right??

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